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A thousand miles from anywhere
We're cold, our hearts bleeding,
But we're happy,
Because now we are together.


Worried parents cry out our names,
But we dont have to cry at all,
Because now we are together.


The sad thing is though,
They cant see us.
They will never see us together.

You see,
We do everything together.

Tonight, we died together.
©2004-2009 ~abbybaby
:iconabbybaby:

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This is a poem i made up about a young couple who aren't allowed to be together, so they run away and kill themselves to make sure they are together forever, a kinda romeo juliet thing. I wrote it to show just how strong minded teenagers can be because i hate how people undermine them.

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:iconjeddikastock:
thats so sad

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check out my other stuff :iconjeddika:
:iconteop118:
I think the only reason why people underrate teenagers is because a lot of us overrate love, or feel that we know so much about it, when we don't, and the older people know that we don't, or at least most of us, so they'll have a mindstate that thinks a certain way when the subject of teens in love comes up.. but then again, I'm young myself so I should shut up. =X oh yeah.. NICE POEM!
:iconsugarbaby195:
thats really sad....

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How great Thou art
:iconmadasahelen:
i do think that some teenagers overrate love or mistake obsession for it, but this is also true of the rest of teh world so who gives a fuck...i was kinda brought up to look down on silly teen romances and doing stupid things, so i guess i have always underrated these things and been paraniod lol. The other day i heard my mum on the phone to her mate basically describing how me and my boyfirend mean nothing to each other and how we're really just friends that hav been using each other for company for the last year. This was totally stuff i knew she thought, and hell that suits me pretty well, but it fucking hurt all the same DAMMIT

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hearts are wasted lives are broken
:iconkikufire:
dont underestimate teenage love, what love starts there can be there for the rest of forever, teens who know there own mind and hearts well and do fall in love are IN LOVE. Its not over reaction or anything like that its bloody love people! *sigh* Such thing like that piss me off really bad, cuz I'm in love *and a teen* and I KNOW my feelings are real. you know how? Its cuz of how intense they are, how different they are from my feelings of friends and any other person in the world that i know, or don't know. I love him. and thats the end of it, I love him now, I loved him before, and I'll continue to love him forever, cuz love never leaves the heart.

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Your the greatest babe,
perfections and imperfections,
I love you Leon,
I’ll love you and be with you to the end of all ends,
and though the birth of all births. :heart:

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