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Together

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A thousand miles from anywhere
We're cold, our hearts bleeding,
But we're happy,
Because now we are together.


Worried parents cry out our names,
But we dont have to cry at all,
Because now we are together.


The sad thing is though,
They cant see us.
They will never see us together.

You see,
We do everything together.

Tonight, we died together.
This is a poem i made up about a young couple who aren't allowed to be together, so they run away and kill themselves to make sure they are together forever, a kinda romeo juliet thing. I wrote it to show just how strong minded teenagers can be because i hate how people undermine them.
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KikuFire's avatar
dont underestimate teenage love, what love starts there can be there for the rest of forever, teens who know there own mind and hearts well and do fall in love are IN LOVE. Its not over reaction or anything like that its bloody love people! *sigh* Such thing like that piss me off really bad, cuz I'm in love *and a teen* and I KNOW my feelings are real. you know how? Its cuz of how intense they are, how different they are from my feelings of friends and any other person in the world that i know, or don't know. I love him. and thats the end of it, I love him now, I loved him before, and I'll continue to love him forever, cuz love never leaves the heart.